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My Own

March 31, 2007

There is so much to give
But yet, I want to give you
Something that is my own
A slice of the blue sky
The yellow of the sun
A spoonful of moonshine
Half of a bulbul’s song
Few waves of the ocean
A box of butterflies
Some glittering dreams
And a fistful of life.

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14 Comments leave one →
  1. March 31, 2007 11:01 PM

    hey..this is lakshmi.. currently class 12 in ps…. happd to read the poem.. tryin to imagine it is unusually nice… 🙂

  2. April 1, 2007 12:19 AM

    love it! love it!

    not to sound silly, but it also has two of my favourite words (favourite because i love the way they sound) – slice and glittering!

    sorry, i think i’ll stop now. :p

  3. April 1, 2007 7:31 AM

    @lakshmi:
    it’s easier to imagine at the beach. that’s where i wrote it. 😛

    @astro:
    thaaaank you! 😀 and i luuuurve the word ‘slice’ too – it’s so fluid!

  4. April 1, 2007 4:00 PM

    this piece reads familiar.. well strung thoughts

    cheers

  5. April 1, 2007 4:03 PM

    voila..read it in ur other blog…

  6. April 1, 2007 4:06 PM

    @noname:
    thank you! 🙂 dinno you frequented my rarely-updated other blog!

  7. April 2, 2007 2:08 AM

    Bravo!

    Wonderful poem. The schema of words in itself depicts a place lying somewhere beyond the words.

    Regards
    Amit

  8. April 2, 2007 7:27 PM

    imdb! :D.. awesome stuff u have here.. :)..

  9. April 3, 2007 9:50 PM

    hey you, i like it! ‘spoonful of moonshine’ rolls of the tongue so wonderfully. and ‘fistful of life’ is a fabulous closing–edgy, ragged.

  10. Sagaro permalink
    April 3, 2007 11:30 PM

    can you spare the torture 😛

  11. April 4, 2007 7:53 PM

    @amit:
    thanks so much! 🙂 i’m happy you think so!

    @tommy:
    hee! thanks! and spare me the imdb tag 😛

    @soumya:
    yep, yep – spoonful is another of my fav words. 😀

    @sagaro:
    can you find something different to say? 🙂

  12. April 8, 2007 12:51 PM

    Can you review and add my blog please

    http://www.formatnreload.blogspot.com

  13. September 22, 2008 8:36 PM

    Spoonful of moonshine. Wow.

  14. September 24, 2008 8:57 PM

    Sharan – 🙂

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