Signs

2008 February 20
by Suraksha

There’s something odd about the structure here. I can’t figure out what, but I had to post it anyway!

A long time ago, when words wouldn’t suffice, your eyes did all the talking. The way you looked at me made me feel desired as no touch could. Every slight tilt of your head begged me to throw myself into your warm arms.

Now, I’ve forgotten to feel. Your eyes don’t speak to me anymore.

9 Responses leave one →
  1. 2008 February 20

    Less of reciprocation from the person might make u feel as the TIME PASSES !! It happens to all !!

  2. 2008 February 20

    Throw yourself into his arms ah? that’s so painful…

    Okay, was just kidding. Nice post. :D

  3. 2008 February 20

    :D lowellllly

  4. 2008 February 21

    @Vinod:
    Er, It’s labelled fiction. :P

    @Gapp:
    Thank you.

    @Vaish:
    Thanks! :D

  5. 2008 February 22

    um , can i have the pw to the other post ? :P

  6. 2008 February 22

    @Venkster:
    Um, no you can’t. It’s max depressive and a lot of tosh, really. :)

  7. 2008 February 23

    hey,
    dropping here for the first time. got navigated from nithya’s blog. good show :)

  8. 2008 February 23

    @Swat:
    Thanks! :) Keep coming back!

  9. 2008 February 23

    how sweet.

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